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false_maria ([personal profile] false_maria) wrote in [community profile] yuri_challenge 2011-03-23 02:12 am (UTC)

LOVE IT. I especially liked the segue from Koume just figuring she'd comfort Akiko in a motherly way to something on a whole other level (and it's true--Akiko probably wouldn't go for being petted like a child by anyone. :D). Felt very true to both of their characters.

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