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spywindow ([personal profile] spywindow) wrote in [community profile] yuri_challenge 2011-04-12 10:25 pm (UTC)

I'm so excited you're tackling these Phoenix Wright prompts! This was great, and sexy. I thought you did a good job capturing both Ema and Franziska's voices and creating believable chemistry between them, and I loved all the silly, quirky details you included -- like Ema clapping, and Franziska's "silly short trousers," and this whole line:

"You know. All with the glimmery-glammery-bling." Ema attempted jazz hands. "The opposite of what a real prosecutor should be, which is simmerous." Peering critically over her glass at Franziska, she added, "You're simmerous."

The story kept me laughing, which feels appropriate for something set in Ace Attorney world. <3 Thank you for sharing it!

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